Thursday, December 3, 2009

English 111

English has always been one of my favorite subjects. I have never really had to work hard in or or study for tests and I have always done exceptionally well. I figured this semester would be no different.

My first class, I was excited to see that Mr. Paul Gasparo was energetic and not boring. I have a hard time paying attention in class so it's always a plus to have an interesting teacher. The work load was a lot, more than any of my classes. More than I ever got in high school but Paul did warn the class the first week that we would have a lot of homework.

We had a lot of things to read and print out to bring to every class, a lot of them we never discussed, which was a waste of time, ink, and paper. He expects that everyone knows how to use a computer well and if you don't it's up to you to figure out how. (Thank goodness I did, or I would've failed the first week). I know a few people in my class who struggled with this and had to drop the class. I don't think that this is fair to them. This class is on campus not online. Computer skills are not required to take this class. It seemed like we had more than one assignment to work on at a time, like a paper due next lass via email, and another writing assignment due next week via the blog for example, and this was always confusing to me because I never knew what was due when. Speaking of due dates, the course calendar was changed so frequently it was pretty much impossible to keep up and I never knew what to expect when I walked into class. Paul is also extremely strict about how you turn things in. While I understand his reasoning behind the file formatting, I think it's unfair to give a student a failing grade on a paper because they named an email "Eng111-49...." instead of "111-49...".

On a more positive note, Paul knows what he's teaching. He knows a great deal of other things too. He keeps the class informed of upcoming events in the community. He was very good about informing classes about updates on the calender and upcoming due dates, etc on blackboard which was helpful. He also responds to questions, emails, chats, in a timely manner. He gave us many opportunities for extra credit such as emailing papers, seeing movies and writing about them, presentations on campus, etc. so there were many things students who were falling behind could do to catch up. The texts, videos, and comics he had us read (even the ones we never discussed) were, for the most part, pretty interesting and supported the things we did in class. For a few weeks we did creative writing, which I really enjoyed. It allowed me to write whatever I wanted to on the selected subject without having to worry about my spelling or grammar. By the end of the class we had learned about said subject and my opinions had usually changed. I wish we had done this the whole year, I feel it taught me a lot about myself. I met new people and was exposed to new ideas through class discussion. I would definitely recommend this class only after explaining the work load and need for computer skills, I feel this class helped me realize I'm not in high school anymore and it's time to grow up and get motivated, Overall my experience this semester in English 111 was a positive one.


Final Diagnostic Essay Draft: My Favorite Job

Most individuals spend the majority of their adult lives working. It’s important that people enjoy the career they choose. The best job I have had, though I have had only two, would have to be my current one. I work as a Nursing Care Partner at Sentara Leigh Hospital in the Labor and Delivery unit. I recently started this job and I love it.

As a Care Partner, I am essentially a Registered Nurse’s Assistant. Care Partner’s have different responsibilities on different units of the hospital. In the Labor and Delivery unit, Care Partners do a variety of things: get rooms ready for new labor patients, attend all deliveries, run tests on cord blood, give baby baths, and assist with patient care for mothers and newborn babies. I became a Care Partner after completing an eight-month class at Sentara School of Health Professions during my senior year of High School. The course consisted of five months of classroom instruction and three months of clinicals.

The things I have experienced since I started this job have been very exciting. My first shift, I witnessed two births. Since then, I have learned many new things pertaining to the care of my patients. I have always loved babies and thought of the birth process as a miraculous thing. Now I have the privilege to witness and take part in it and to actually get paid for it; it seems too good to be true.

I have now been a Care Partner for 4 months. i have experienced so many things, both good and bad. I have made friends, of all ages, from all different backrounds who all have something different to offer. The nurses I work with are extremely knowledgable and have taught me more than I ever thought I would learn. They have helped me through difficult times such as caring for sick babies and fetal demises. We have rejoiced when we have births. We stay up all night together, sometimes multiple niights in a row, and in a sense they are my second family.

I am attending Community College to obtain my prerequisites for nursing school. I plan to become a Registered Nurse. I will attend Sentara’s BSN program to accomplish this. I have not chosen the field I may specialize in but I do know I would like to continue to work with babies or children.While being a Care Partner is a rewarding job, it is not easy. I am on my feet most of the time. I work the night shift, 11:00 pm to 7:00 am, and it seems either I am sleeping to prepare for work or recovering from it. I am also realistic enough to know that not all labor and deliveries end happily. When that happens, I am certain I will grieve along with the family and it will have a devastating impact on me but I will get through it. After all, part of the life cycle is also death, even if it comes too early. To be able to see the miracle of birth and to help patients in the hospital is a rewarding job.




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Tuesday, September 22, 2009

Diagnostic Essay: My Favorite Job.

Most individuals spend the majority of their adult lives working. It’s important that people enjoy the career they choose. The best job I have had, though I have had only two, would have to be my current one. I work as a Nursing Care Partner at Sentara Leigh Hospital in the Labor and Delivery unit. I recently started this job and I love it.
As a Care Partner, I am essentially a Registered Nurse’s Assistant. Care Partner’s have different responsibilities on different units of the hospital. In the Labor and Delivery unit, Care Partners do a variety of things: get rooms ready for new labor patients, attend all deliveries, run tests on cord blood, give baby baths, and assist with patient care for mothers and newborn babies. I became a Care Partner after completing an eight-month class at Sentara School of Health Professions during my senior year of High School. The course consisted of five months of classroom instruction and three months of clinicals.

The things I have experienced since I started this job have been very exciting. My first shift, I witnessed two births. Since then, I have learned many new things pertaining to the care of my patients. I have always loved babies and thought of the birth process as a miraculous thing. Now I have the privilege to witness and take part in it and to actually get paid for it; it seems too good to be true.

I am attending Community College to obtain my prerequisites for nursing school. I plan to become a Registered Nurse. I will attend Sentara’s BSN program to accomplish this. I have not chosen the field I may specialize in but I do know I would like to continue to work with babies or children.
While being a Care Partner is a rewarding job, it is not easy. I am on my feet most of the time. I work the night shift, 11:00 pm to 7:00 am, and it seems either I am sleeping to prepare for work or recovering from it. I am also realistic enough to know that not all labor and deliveries end happily. When that happens, I am certain I will grieve along with the family and it will have a devastating impact on me but I will get through it. After all, part of the life cycle is also death, even if it comes too early. To be able to see the miracle of birth and to help patients in the hospital is a rewarding job.
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